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Revisions: Cover


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A few revision were made to the cover. For instance, the title was revised so that the quality was better, making the text look sharper and less rigid. Also, there was a change in the name of the title, so that the target audience would have a wider spectrum. Rather than being restricted to Sarasota, it is now broadened to all of southern Florida. There were also changes to the features so that there was more cohesiveness between the members of the group. 


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